A short story one of my Chinese students, He King, wrote in class today
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Weijing. She used to play with her friends on the beach but one day the sea swallowed her and she died. Everyone cried, but Weijing was not truly dead for she became a bird who lived on the bottom of the sea instead. But Weijing disliked the cold sea so she started to build a tower of sand and stones to escape, and for many years, days and night she worked hard, until one day, she could see the sun again. And as she left the sea, Weijing became a girl again.
I corrected the grammar and spelling, which was rather off, but I really liked the story, so I thought I’d share it.
AAAWWWWWWWWWWWW that is the BEST story!